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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This has definaetly helped me learn more on how to get the word out about here.
I used to just tell my friends about, but now I see there are many other ways.
Thank you for the great information!
I'll be sure to start referring back to this a LOT!
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Review of The Lonely Tower  
Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: E | (5.0)
I truly have to stop reading your work. This one.. wow. It wasn't until I read the line about the color of the hair that I knew what it was about.

How someone can make so many poems on various subjects and make them good is beyond me, but you do it well.
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Review of Empty Hangers  
Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very honest showing of how things can be.

Without going into varied detale you show how dreams have slipped away, only once again to be reclaimed.

Very good work.
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Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: E | (5.0)
The more I read of your work the more impressed I am.

It seems your diversity is larger than I had immagined. I am also glad that talent like yours is not going unseen.

Another great work!
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Review of I, Katrina  
Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, and wow. I never thought that to see it from the perspective of the storm would be calming and empowering. There are a lot of other poems out there that describe the destruction and the human pain of the storm, but to make one from the perspective of the storm itself I haven't seen before.

This is a very good poem and not just in the style, but how you show that the storm wasn't against the people, or anything like that. You showed that a hurrican or storm is just that, with it's own ideas as to what it is there for.

The wearther was here before we were, and in it there is a power and process we as humans are just starting to understand.

Thank you for a view not seen before. I hope to see more like this.
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Review of Truth  
Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
The lines between the person being hit and the one doing the hitting are a little vague to me. Perhaps you may want to italicize the diffrent POV. It would make it a little easier to read, as would some punctuation.

It does show the anger from his POV but not the real hurt from the person being hit. Otherwise it is a good poem and shows most of the emotion in the situation.
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Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! I first thought it was about Civil war soldiers then I got to the end. It's very true how each year, no matter what grade, children feel the same about starting the year.

I've seen children lined up, waiting go start their day, but never thought of them this way before. Thank you for an inspiring view into the minds of the young.

I think someone once said only the truly young at heart can know the minds they watch over. I think you are one of those few.
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Review by Maera Lynn Koz
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Pretty funny, espcially for us here in Dairy Country. Would have liked to see all the lyrics though.
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