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Review by mahaadevii
Rated: E | (3.5)
Your story leaves me wanting to know what happened in her nightmare. Was it something horrifying, or just saddening for Cora? You need to post a continuation to your story a little bit sooner I'd advise. With at least a hint of what is going on with the nightmare, other readers would know what direction the story is going and what to expect, as right now the story is too short to drag them in. Still, a good start. It was smoothly written with a good flow of the words.
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