Oh, Wow. potent stuff. Again, the poet paints vivid pictures. I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but love to read it. This particular one has some of the meter and rhythm of a sonnet. You show power in a turn of phrase that catches the reader right in the gut (excuse the term). I like your work. I still want to see something in a lighter vein. If you can do so much with such emotional material I know you could do lighter, Tears and laughter aren't that far apart. Now I'd like to see something that makes me laugh. Or chuckle. Or at least grin. Good Work!
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Sparse language very effective. Sounds like poet is writing from the heart, personal experience; the mark of a true poet. It's too, too sad. Made me stop and think about myself. I like poetry that makes me look inward, and this is very effective at doing that. The beginning and ending were strongest lines. The middle was a little weaker. Author has a good voice. This reviewer will look for more by her. Maybe something a little lighter.
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