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Review by Matilda
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It's really creative and makes great reading for children. I particularly like the way you have written so well from an animal's point of view - that takes a great deal of creativity. I also like the brevity of the tale - one doesn't get tired and park it for another day's reading.

Look out for small grammatical errors though - they can spoil the reading experience.

Otherwise, love the story and all the best in your writing.
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