Wow! I am very thankful my boys do not have a window to throw things from. I love the story. The ending was missing something. But it was a grand story and well written.
Wow! I can almost feel the hurt in the writers words as I read this. I am so sorry for your lost love. I really liked the way you used somany words to describe your feelings . I am glad you chose to use the hurt and emotion as a sorce for writing.
What a great inperation poem! I really enjoyed this poem. The only thing I noticed was the line, "Don't be ashamed you cried." The past tense on Ashamed and cried seemed a bit off to me. It wasn't bad. It just sort of stopped me for a second. Other than that, I loved it!
Good job! I really liked the story line. Although it was nothing like what I had in mind. My answers were no where close. But I liked the message this writer sent.
I was amazed when I saw this poll! I have heard alot lately about "Freedom Of religion". So I was a bit shocked to see such a poll. I Think its a wonderful question. Though it has been debated for years, I am sure it will always be debated by someone. But fr me the answer is simple. Jesus IS the son of God. He became flesh so He could feel our pain. He also ame so that we ight be saved and live a life free of sin.
The only real negative thing I can say about this is about the title. think it should b "Who Is Jesus" Not Who Was...
Bu all in all I enjoyed this poll. Thanks for being brave enoug to post this.!
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