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Review of word magic  
Review by meganleean
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I wish you wouldn't have started it as thirteen now becomes fourteen, because now we know what you are talking about right off the bat. Let your readers have a little mystery. Maybe you could start as today is a big day, or today is the day. You see were i'm coming from.
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