Magic. Perfect. Incredibly funny and irrational. I enjoyed the story, told in 500 words and all in dialoue! Wow. I wanted MORE. The ending was just right and a total surprise. I was not expecting it at all. You deserve my Awardicon. Congratulations. I admire your work and creativity. MS
I often wonder how did Germany get by after these conditions. It was six long years of WWII. Adolf Hitler was a murderer of millions, a master of destruction and organized madness. We must never forget whatever color, religion, nationality, insanity. This story is a letter to humanity! I am amazed with the craziness and raw reality of a moment in History, depicted in this story, that has to be remembered. An excellent piece. An excellent read. MHSUSS
I couldn't stop thinking on how beautiful, inspiring and so true this story is. I would like to congratulatye the author and express my deepest of emotions and feelings after reading this beautiful story of life and continuity. I believe in this continuity so much.
The last sentence was breathtaking. He will certainly life life to its fullest, this time, right? Meghan
Ohh so romantic and so nice, really. I want to know what happens. What will she do? Of course she'll start a romantic e-love correspondence, right? Please tell me. Where is chapter 2? I wanted more information on chapter 1, though. MO
The beauty and dark meaning of life and death and spirituality. Such a delightful reading. I was impressed and surprised by the intense feeling the story left in my mind and in my soul. I really liked it though it was at times somber and sad. Yes, we are the ones thst erase the written lines of our destiny. MS
Excellent. The conversation between the wife and the Devil - dramatic. What is it that really wins in the end, huh? You really grabbed my attention. This was different from all that gibberish we find and so called Gothic. Good work. You are creative and strong. Meghan
One of the best paranormal stories I've read so far because it's different. What you wrote here, the way you wrote it - "He happily lived in that house with his wife, Amparo and his 7 children: Antonio, Alvaro, Artur, Afonso, Angelo, Armando and Arlindo Macedo Junior. And, mysteriously… they all died but him." This was funny and very good! And this - "Then, silence. No more anger or pain… or noise. A perfect stillness and balance. The air had become lighter and so had my heart. I understood. I knew it was over." Good. But the ending, thumbs up. Meghan
This story was incredibly "real", as if I was there with the medium. I liked this part: "They would find you, detect your thoughts, connect to you, suck your energy, and finally, kill you. They'd come from your past and from your bad actions, from you "hurting" somebody in your past life and who could not and would not forgive and forget you. " You write in an incredible way. Meghan
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