I really like this a lot, I feel this exact way when I write, Some lines may be a little too long and may not rhyme perfectly, but it's all from my heart and my own lil mess, I guess. You did a great job!!
I love this!! This is so me. Hiding behind so much and if people only knew an ounce of my reality. I guess there are a lot of people who feel this way. But, you did a really good job!
I love this!! I get the point you are trying to get across. We all want to know what life is, why we are here and try to fit in until we figure it out. You did a really good job getting your point across.
I like your poem, and I can relate. The hunt for such a feeling is so on going, never ending. I have a poem in my port that you might like to look at, its called Oh pills. But I really did like this poem!
This poem is pretty. I couldnt imagine ever going through the loss of a child. I write a lot about the loss of my mom and I couldnt imagine trying to find words that would tribute my child. Short and sweet and to the point. loved and missed.
I really liked your poem. Death can make people some of the most profound words. Death inspires me more than life. I write a lot about death and sorrow. So I like to rate poems within the same genre. I will have to look at your portfolio because youre a good writer and I'm sure I will like some of your other work.
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