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Review of Gratitude  
Review by mia
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hii I'm Mia
I really liked your story especially the descriptions, they really made me feel inside of it.

I think you prefectly descibed the feeling of gratitude and how you matured to understand what it is.

Keep up the good work!
Mia


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Review by mia
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey there,

I really liked what you wrote! It is very clear and well written.
I love how you used the adjective poisened, a word with a negative meaning, to describe love, a word that's generally used with a positive meaning.

I can relate to what you wrote because I often love and recive nothing in return as well...

From a newbie to another: you're doing great, keep up with the good work!

With love
Mia
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Review of Purpose  
Review by mia
Rated: E | (4.0)
We don't live in a film where everyone have purposes, like the main character has to save the wrold, the love intrest has to make the protagonist fall in love and so on.

I think you decide your one purpose, you live for yourself.
You dont have to succeed in life just to make your parents proud, you should succeed for your own happiness.

Ofte when people think about successe people think about becoming rich having a big mansions and blah blah blah, while I think succeeding in life is doing something you love, surounded by the people you love and being happy.
And if your happy while eating a cheeseburg then keep doing just that.
Because at the end of the day, as dark as it might sound, we are going to die anyway. So might as well live your life at the fullest and try to be as happy as you possiblie can.

I hope this help!
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