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Review of The Inner Me  
Review by Mikey Mou$e
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey there I totally love your life story!! By the way this is ruwth's grandson the one with Aspergers Syndrome. One thing I encourage you to do is not to be shy about the fact that you have aspergers. Although I do understand it seemed a little embarassing to me at first, I remember when I was 16 I lived with my Granny Ruwth, and I would act a little strange, and then she would tell people that I have aspergers. So I understand that it can be a little embarassing. I use to be shy about it too, and at first people didn't notice that I had aspergers, but then I got comfortable with them and I would act sort of strange, and people got freaked out. So by the time I was 17 I just thought maybe I should tell people that I have aspergers or ASD. Now fewer people avoid me because they are more understanding when I let them know that I have aspergers so now people get more of a heads up. So think of it as a gift from God. Thats what I do. I have a better memory than most people. I see things that most people don't see. Sometimes with me people think that I'm like a cool magician kind of guy. I totally love that feeling. Every girl that I've dated from 17 to now I have told them that I have aspergers back when I was 16 that's a huge thing to do. So again I encourage you to be BOLD about it, and show it off. I let everyone that I know or if I get to know them that I have aspergers or ASD. I show it off and if people avoid me I just do what I call be the duck if you don't know what that means I am going to let you know. When the duck comes out of the water the water slides off his back. So if someone avoids me I be that duck I let their mean attitude towards me roll off my back and move on. It takes a lot of practice. But it gets easier. I hope that you will be bold about it and see what happens. First if you meet someone new and yall click, you should get to know them before you tell them. I hope this was a good thing for me to say. I hope to hear from you sometime. Thanks

michael_mason :)

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Review of Horseshoe Canyon  
Review by Mikey Mou$e
Rated: E | (3.5)
In paragragh one, you put we in quotations twice when you only should've put it in it once. Like when you said another thing that "we" did. You should of put Another thing we did ______ I think I would prefer a fictionalized story. Because I think it would be more interesting. So I sort of didn't care for it.
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