This was one of the most impressive stories that I have read in a long time. Congratulations, my dear author. I was shocked and stunned; surprised and touched. You made me rethink my past, my family, my friends, my future and all the possibilities one has in life. I will try to avoid meanness and anger - the world doesn't owe you a living and you must work hard to make it significant. Great , great story. M. ORI
I OFTEN WONDERED HOW CAN A PERSON WRITE A STORY IN 500 WORDS - SO LITTLE TO SAY - BUT YOU SAID IT ALL AND SO WELL IN THIS SHORT STORY, THE PIT, AND I AM COMPLETELLY AND TOTALLY IMPRESSED. CONGRATULATIONS. I HOPE YOU WIN THE CONTEST. GOOD LUCK. IT IS VERY GOOD. M. ORI
I believe that I will follow this story and I am hoping to read chapter 2 very soon. Really nice, romantic, different and enjoyable read. WHAT will she do??? What will happen to her??? I need more chapters. So nice. I liked the way you talked about love and life and choices. Mishima Ori
What an extraordinary, compelling and imaginative short story. I was profoundly touched. And this: "You know what? You’re right. I'll en-soul. Let’s go. Show me the way to the "Transmigration of the Soul Gate". To know that you lived a life before this one and that there are many more to come is a very attractive perspective from which to judge the meaning of my life and my evolution. I’m ready to live my existence!” So nice! MO
I was deeply touched by your poem - the words used and the meaning and the feeling. Very nice. I don't know why but it touched my heart, maybe it's late, mybe I'm sad, maybe I'm tired, mybe it's just a lovely poem or everything together. Good work. MishimaOri
I N C R E D I B L E ! This story touched me so deeply that I cried. You touched my heart. Beautiful. You should read this in schools and universities. MishimaOri
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