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Review of My Mind's Recess  
Review by Misstaken
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this poem very much. The flow of the words is great. My only suggestion would be to drop the last "Deep within the recess of my mind" at the end of every verse, with exception of possibly making it the last line of the poem. Great job!
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