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Review of Not so Sweet  
Review by mjr1234
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
you are an amazing writer! this sould be published! this story has amazing and with a little help it will be published!
One minor thing that you could alter is a little less dialoge!
If you want to, you can post another article with corrections!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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