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Review by Moona
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good outcome of an event that could have become a tragedy. May you and Linda live a long and happy life, enjoying every minute of it! Thank you for sharing your experience!
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Review of Summer Storm  
Review by Moona
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice, evocative poem about nature! I am member of cloud watchers international on facebook. That would be a good place to publish this poem.
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Review by Moona
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love, respect, tolerance for others. Yes.
But without a decent dose of all of that for oneself it is impossible to give to others.

You gave a good argument. Love is emotional, but agape can be rational also.

And although it is easy to lose one's head when in love it is better to retain a logic approach.
Thank you for your thoughts.
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Review of Deeper Still..  
Review by Moona
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good start!
Spill the treasures of your mind....
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Review by Moona
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well stated, Ben. The battle needs to be fought again. Pick your position and picket for your choices!
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Review by Moona
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great seasonal fun and really useful for the reindeer!
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Review by Moona
Rated: E | (5.0)
interesting and compelling!
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Review by Moona
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Tim,
You are doing well with rhyming verse and capturing insights.
Is it better to take arms against a sea of trouble.....
or is it better to do nothing????
You are doing something by sharing your poem!
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Review by Moona
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love that insight! Keep going!
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Review by Moona
Rated: E | (5.0)
excellent fairy tale for our decadent times
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Review of Branford  
Review by Moona
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well captured, I feel the music and see you reaching for the stars.
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Review of The Blues Man  
Review by Moona
Rated: E | (3.5)
this is an evocative story but could include more action
I like how beginning and end link and the music goes on...
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Review of Harry's Prairie  
Review by Moona
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Arukun,
That is a great story, it resonated with me and I told it to my husband straight away.
In South Australia I planted a native garden and via Trees For Life many native seedlings have now grown into trees there. But our neighbour regards Eucalypts as weeds and prefers clean dirt!!!!
Thanks for sharing
Moona
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Review of The Note  
Review by Moona
Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting story with time honoured elements: The Journey. The path. Obstacles on the path. Reaching the end to be rewarded with wisdom. Well done!
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Review by Moona
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a passionate reaction to the looming danger of a buffoon in the White House.
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