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Review of Fragmented Minds  
Review by Ms. Mischelle
Rated: E | (3.0)
I found this to be very interesting. I know very little about Schizophrenia or how it feels to have it. The descriptions are very impressive and the flow was good. My only criticism would be the layout. I'm thinking it was done this way to show the confusion that people with Schizophrenia feel.
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Review of Alone with Lana  
Review by Ms. Mischelle
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The story has a wonderful flow. The descriptions are vivid and helps create a very good picture of the scene. I really enjoyed reading it. I like and dislike the ending. I like it because it lets the reader mind run with possible scenarios. But then I dislike it because I really want to know what happens/happened next.
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