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Rated: E | (5.0)
This story really held my attention. It seems to be an outline for what could be a pretty good book. I was curious about Melanie's family and wanted a little more information on her parents. It seems obvious that her father knows she is black - why would he let her get a blood test? Just curious. All in all, a very good story.
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