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Review by Mello
Rated: E | (4.0)
Its a bit hard to follow the concept, but it is very interesting! please let me know if you decide to put more. I would love to read more Im really interested in learning what wasnt meant for her. She is dead yes? and why is he trying to save her soul?
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Review of Faeries  
Review by Mello
Rated: E | (4.0)
The errors interupted the flow of my reading, but from what i read it grabbed me enough to continue reading if there were more.
some suggestions, maybe perhaps change morals to code, as morals is more personal and a group usual dont share morals but they can share a set of rules like a code.
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