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Review of I Miss  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
very soulful . it would have been better if you could make it into a rhyming scheme . :)
thanks for sharing your gift
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Review of Black Dog Waiting  
Review by myopensud
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
jack ,
sorry for the late reply . but reading about your black dog , i never think you are wasting your time here . Everyone has a black dog within them . At the beginning if it drags you , later one day it will get bored and will walk you .." woah !! what a powerful imagery . but i felt that your poem is a bit too prosaic . No offence but i prefer it to be more with a flow .. anyways thanks for sharing your gift !!
write on
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