This is a sweet, mysterious, lovely and inspiring little story! Loved it. I was sad that it ended. I wanted to read more about Fran and Flo and about the Big One. Myrna
Outstanding. Scary. Amazing. Full of wisdom and spirituality. There are a lot of lessons to learn in this creative story. It's impossible to stop the secrets of the river of life. Thank you for this bizarre story. Myrna
I am impressed with the beauty, honesty and intensity of this love story. I loved your life, chrisdaltro, it is passionate, vibrant and full of color. Wonderful read. I am sorry it has ended but as you said, a true love story has no end and so this story will always be in my memory. Are they still together? Is it true? Each and every chapter was exciting and different and full of life. Write on! Congrats. Myrna
This chapter was romantic, touching and sincere. I felt a kind of sadness, a feeling of insecurity. Does Christina really want to change her life (and all what she went through in life) and to live with a lonely man in an island with a dog? Will this be her fate, what she really wants in life? I am curious to read the last chapter... MS
I especially liked this Part 1 for Butchie and Europe. I agree with what you said about France. Someone nearly took my camera there. The McDonald's thing was hilarious! MS
I once had a dog... Bobby. He got sick and died in my arms. I did all I could. It was all about a worm in his intestines. I loved him dearly. I know how one feels about dogs. I understood her. What will she do now, without Butchie? Nice chapter. Myrna
This part was so heartful and touching. I was happy for her finally meeting her own dad. It brought tears to my eyes. I had a similar situation but with an aunt. Very touching little chapter. Myrna
Ahhhh finally, the e-encounter, the e-love, the meeting: INCREDIBLY ROMANTIC AND TOUCHING. I liked the: explosive perfection!!! part; the Texas Affair part (hillarious) and Butchie and Christina's conversation about relationship sites and age... really real. I would like to ad that my favorite sentence is this ine >>> " After that very tall, strong, heavy and older looking Sheriff handcuffed me when I had put my hands back, he patted my hands... and asked me: "Does it hurt? Is it hurting you?" Beautifully said. You write, I follow. respectfully & truly yours, Myrna
I read all the remaining chapters in a sequence and this one didn't really catch my eye. I want the action. what will happen to them. Come on! Give me more! I want more! Myrna
I must say... THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER. This was incredible. I have been waiting to return from my long vacation and continue reading my chapters. It thought about e-love while I was away. I missed the next chapters. I AM BACK. Write more. I follow! Myrna
Do you know what? For me this was the best chapter ever. Well, I'm not so sure, thae chapter where shev speaks to her doctor was good as well. I simply loved this chapter. The fortune teller character, the way she was, the room, the crystal ball, it was as if I was right there in the room, listening. Wonderful, wonderful chapter, chrisdaltro. Myrna
I simply LOVED the Church of the Holy Sepulcher (or the Church of the Resurrection) conversation. it is the true relationship of human beings, a wonderful part of living. I thought it was fantastiv, chrisdaltro, it made me calm and feel in peace, I laughed and I felt warm. I loved this chapter! All of it. Myrna
Such richness in details and words and actions and thoughts! I really enjoyed reading about the TWINS and also about the spiritual conversation between the main character and her father. I cried. So touching. What a life's story. Myrna
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