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Review by Dawn Charboneau
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Beautifully written poem! I really do love it, all the imagery and the emotion. However, I didn't rate it the full five stars because of some punctuation errors. For example "Too soon Too fast" should have been "too soon too fast". And "ever , never" should have been "ever, never".
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