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Review of Iron and Ore  
Review by sonic
Rated: E | (5.0)
You've crafted a nice portrait. I can feel the heat of day and smell the creosote. Were all of the lines kept short for visual purposes? Some of the phrases might show their metre better if they were allowed to flow into greater length.. just speculation. No need to change anything here. Beautiful!
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