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Review by nancyb
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have read your work before, but I find this one particularly touching. We all can relate to our first kiss no matter how young or old we may be. Your story describes this moment in time perfectly. The girls are so precociously teenage. And the boy looks lost like he really doesn't get it. We all want fairytale endings, but you didn't write a fairytale. Absolutely beautiful!
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