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Review of Altzhimers letter  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Being the care giver of an Alzheimers patient I look at this mental distress daily. Today my patient has no inkling of what we had for dinner last night, let alone lunch yesterday. All those watching is to try to make the person comfortable and safe, you thinking out of the box is necessary but optional.

This was a good piece, I really like how you went from first person to third person with such ease.
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