This is really great. I dunno why all I've been reviewing is poetry today, because I normally hate it, but this is good! Really good! This may sound odd but it looks good too, the way that you formatted it, that is. I can really feel the emotions, and I can really understand where you're coming from.
Wow! That was really good. It was really dark and beautiful, you have great spelling, great grammar, and a great idea! I can really feel the pain and despair that you were trying to convey in this poem. I don't normally like poetry, but if it was this short and great I think I'd like poetry a lot more. I'll definitely be reading more of your works in the future.
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