Wow. I wasn't really sure where you were going with this story and at first I was a little skeptical but in the end I loved it! The metaphor was perfect and I'm surprised I never realized it having two dogs of my own. You can really learn a lot about things in unexpected places and this is a perfect example. Bravo.
I really enjoy your style of writing and I definitely am going to continue reading the rest of the chapters. I also like the names, slang, and other vocabulary that you've created in this and hope that I can see more of it with future readings. I'm not sure if I'm totally correct but I see some Mazerunner and Hunger Games similarities and inspirations. Both excellent books and I hope yours turns out to be just as good.
This seems interesting enough. In all honesty, this sounds a bit cliche. Not the storyline but instead how everything is being said. I don't know how to put it but that's how I feel. What age group are you trying to reach? Because if it's teenagers then I would say it's alright but if trying to get to young adult then try to add my complexity and depth in the writing.With that in mind I still think this can be a very good story. Thanks for the the read and review mine if you'd like.
I like the basis of the story and would really like to see a chapter from it. A million questions could be asked from what we know as readers but it's your job as the author to fill us in and I believe if you do that, it may be a very good book. I really like the idea aboout how they got their powers and the connection to plants it all seems very interesting. Read, rate, and review mine if you have a chance.
I liked this chapter even more than the first one. the language used and the type of slang in context is well used and intriguing. I'm definitely going to keep on reading these because I already have a million questions that I hope I can find answers to. Keep up the good work!
This story seems incredibly interesting! I like the scenery in the story and it sort of reminds me of one of those bars from Star Wars. I would love to read more chapters of this and the story also seems original. I don't divulge into too many stories that relate to space stations or ships but this story is making me want to. I really hope i can read more.
This seems like a very interesting story. I like it from what I've read so far and I believe that I'm going to read the subsequent chapters. Thanks for the read!
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