I find the story really amazing and beautifully written.By the story ended,I found myself smiling and it really won my heart. The imagery of woods, sweat, kiss etc. is simply mesmerizing.
This poem of yours definitely deserves a huge round of applause and appreciations from every critic as this is really very heart touching and emotional and it clearly depicts the pain and the agony leading to the dejection following an attempt to suicide. the best thing about this poem is the introduction of the teacher who recognizes the talent and comes in his life like a candle in the darkness giving him the strength and positive energy which makes him recognize his worth and his talent also makes him forget his physical inability and pain....
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