Good topic . When I was reading it I was thinking of my best friend too. true friendship is rare and precious. Thank you. Loved the poem. Keep writing.
I liked the topic of your poem and respect the way you show your affection, love and respect to your father-in-law in your poem. the thing is poetry is nothing but the expression of our deepest and inner feelings for our beloved persons,family,friends,nature and life. your poem showed the tenderness and beauty of your soul which is the sign of a good poet. keep writing.
hi sandara,
this is morning pearl[pen name]. i am a bangladeshi girl. nice to meet you. i welcome you in this site. here you can write whatever you want to write. hope you will find many friends here.
honestly speaking you write very well. in fact all the members of writing.com have different potentiality. i liked the topic very much and could feel the depth of the poem. i hope GOD will review your deep realization and HE can reward you the best for the poem. I cannot help rating the poem 5.
LOTS OF QUESTIONS! DO YOU REALLY ASK YOURSELF THIESE?MAY BE WE ASK OURSELVES MORE. IT WILL BE BETTER IF YOU WRITE ANOTHER POEM NAMED 'ANSWERS' . HAH IM JOKING BUT HONESTLY SPEAKING ITS GREAT. SPECIALLY THE LAST QUESTION
'WHY DO I ASK MYSELF WHY?'
hi
this is morning pearl. i have read the poem . good poem really. i think this poem is such that we have to feel it more than we judge . i liked the last two lines of the 4th para.overall a good poem. keep writing.
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