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Review of Untitled  
Review by KingKinky
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello,

I liked it made me think of a while ago when I would start a story, mainly a fanfiction, and never finish. Just having bits and parts of what could have had a great potential to capture a reader's attention.

And the way I used the word like to describe the text would be as in I would like to see more and may even read a longer story if it was to play out. Please keep up writing even if it is just small drafts like this.

Goodbye and stay gold.
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Review of Candy  
Review by KingKinky
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello. I read your poem 'Candy' and found it simple and even sweet (I'm funny).

It can connect with everyone about something we all know and love. A treat to bring us back to the times we didn't have a care in the world. This poem is well written, only one thing I would say annoyed me was how it said,

'Inside the shop is warm,
Outside is a brewing storm.'

The lines remind me of the song 'sweater weather' by The Neighborhood. Yes they do not own the idea a place or person can make you feel a bad time as a storm feel warmer the lines may make it seem you lack a bit of creativity.

Overall I like the poem and it made me a bit happier than I was. Please keep up your work and maybe I will end up reviewing another writing by you. Goodbye and Stay gold.
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Review of Almost Deaf  
Review by KingKinky
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello.

I enjoyed reading your poem 'Almost deft'. It had meaning of how we as humanity are doing such things to enrage the birds, or as you put them as eyes of god. It was a calming and energizing thing for me to read and I would much enjoy to read more by you. Over all I did re-read it out of confusion and wanting to feel the feelings of you as the author.

I'm not a good or even talented reviewer so I do apologize if this is a bad review. But I did like the poem and want you to know that you should keep it up.

Stay gold.
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