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Review by SpaceDonkeyPrime
Rated: E | (2.5)
This poem has a very message and deals with very good themes that I can relate to. I enjoyed it immensely. There are several spelling mistakes, so I will provide a proofread version.

My Soul
Where has it gone,
Has it fled from the depths of secret pose
Is it uniting with universal souls,
Are you searching for intuition?

This I do not know,
Its purpose or mission
The colors of its vision
It is comprehensible.

Winning is nothing,
when your soul is
Lost.
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