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Review of OUT AT SIXTY  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello again Ann,
I admire your courage and frankness of sharing this story of your life to all of us in this awesome Writing.Com!
I am happy for you that you found yourself, your true identity and that this story is something to be proud of because I strongly believe there is nothing wrong for being a lesbian or a gay.
What matters most is the goodness of the heart and how you love yourself as well as how
you love your neighbors and how you give importance to your relationship to all people with honor and respect.
This generation is accepting gay people not like the previous generations wherein they cannot find ways to show their true identities because the society frowned them which was wrong.
My family has very good friends of both lesbians and gays and we highly respect them.
To conclude this review, once again I am happy for you that you love yourself and you are also being loved. It is always a nice feeling to be accepted and embraced of who we are and what we are. Some people are hypocrites possibly because of the old religious upbringing, but as I said, we are all equal and loved by God simply because He created us.
BE HAPPY ! BE VERY HAPPY !
WRITE ON !
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Review of Angel  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings waynelee,
Captivating title and intriguing caption below the title. Intriguing because I simply cannot guess so I decided to read it from the start to the end.
My suggestion....
Choices made now, bye and bye
Possibly you can change bye and bye to......by and by
on loves splendid wings......Please put an apostrophe in the word loves
Suggestion only.
Thank you for sharing your talent through a very meaningful work.
Write On !
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Review of Beyond the Books  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings Feather Pane,
An introduction to your future book. A Prologue and I believe it offers a great read. I wish you Luck and reap the ripe fruits of Success !
I look forward to read the whole story.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Fear  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings rabidbaboon,
Very true !
I agree with you in describing this four letter word that gives so much worrying to a lot of people.
The last line makes your poetry so adorable.
We all need to fight Fear so as not to die young.
Great art ! Nice Poetry !
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings daisygirl,
You are a very convincing author as in you let your readers read every word without even winking or batting an eyelash as the storyline is so interesting,and the suspense is there.
Captivating title, captivating story.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On !
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Review of Jesus is Lord!  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings ruwth,
A very inspiring folder that shows JESUS living in your heart and soul.
The best way of spreading the very good news.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to read this.
Good Morning from the Philippines !
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings Itchy Water,
A poem created out from the deepest pain. Very sad, like the lyrics of the song, How Can You Mend A Broken Heart.
The poem is Perfect in its own way, Sad and Lonely, and the questioning heart is weeping.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings Satori,
The title is very intriguing and the writing is like a handbook that discusses a lot of things and there is a substance in every issue and all the same I was intrigued.
Thank you for sharing The mirrors of Shambala.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Farewell My Child  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings again BSchool,
A story that expresses Change and Observations of life. Yes ! Change is necessary for all of us to grow in every aspect of our whole being,and that is the main message of this nicely presented and well..written short story.
I have nothing to edit.
Thank you for another great read.
Write ON.
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Review of The Tech Guy  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings BScholl,
Interesting character of The Tech Guy, and an interesting story as well.
Nicely presented and wisely shared.
I admire the gift of every person, and for the tech guy... I admire most the gift of patience and skills to work with much dexterity in such a job that I myself cannot do.
So blessed and I feel blessed too reading your work.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review of Visit to Scotland  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings ilovehorses,
I was captivated by the given title as Scotland is so far away from my very own country, the Philippines.
Very true, it gives us a grieving hearts when people so close to us
die, and we can only pray for the rest of their souls.
My suggestion in this work:
Possibly you can change the genre into a Short Story, not a Prose.
Also the letter i, please capitalize the letter I.
"killed herself this spring and was replaced"
This intrigued me or possibly you can change this to:
"a dedicated nurse died this spring and was replaced."That is if the flow of the story is based on the character Nancy.
Suggestions Only.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of FOREVER  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Simple Dykie,
A Sci_fi in a narrative form that expresses so many thoughts about life, about men, about nature, about God and many more.
A short story that for me sounds like a brilliant prose and it is touching and much inspiring.
A special kind of machine with such wonderful feelings and sentiments to share.
Brilliant author.
I have nothing to correct.
I enjoy reading "FOREVER" that reminds me of a lyrics of one of the most beautiful songs that sings"
Forever is not enough to love you."
Thank you for thw worthwhile read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Pressed flowers  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings iluvhorses,
Yes, this is an emotional piece releasing what is in your soul through "Pressed Flowers" in a nicely written prose. Surely the
healing process begins.
My suggestion.
The letter i....which was being used three times in this work.
Please have them capitalized...... I played, I hide, I take
Once corrected this makes a perfect work.
Suggestion Only.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Accept Me  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Dana,
A form of an advice to somebody else through poetry. Unique and has a lesson to share.
My suggestion:
because of what you use to be....
Please change the word use to...used...
Yes....I agree with you that one has to accept and embrace oneself and loving who you are and what you are makes a better person inside and out.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sarah Jane,
I love this poem that sounds like a beautiful song to me.
Hope is a virtue that keep us going no matter what the situation so we must all keep hoping, keep believing and keep dreaming is the lovely message that I received reading your work.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings Christina,
A reflection time and we all need this one.
Yesterday is gone, and today is all we have because Tomorrow may never comes. This writings made me more grateful to the Lord of my existence and of my whole being.
A very touching and inspiring piece that you are sharing.
My suggestion....
Judgement Day...Please change the word Judgement to...Judgment
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review of I AM  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Itchy Water,
Yes ! I agree with every line and I admire you as well as your poetry.
Brave and courageous and standing still for who you are and what you are, unique and very precious.
Nobody is perfect but what is important is the goodness of the heart and surely all is well.
Thank you for sharing your talent through " I AM "
Keep writing and keep positng.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
Comedy in a very special and precious way.
Wonderful Haiku with truly wonderful lines that completed this work.
Awesome as it is thank makes life more worth living.
Great talent.
I love Haiku poetry and this one is so full of life, so inspiring.
Write On.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings Ledger,
Very interesting, very challenging and very wise way of sharing in this awesome community.
The title offers lot of imagination.
Brilliant idea of creating chapter after chapter from different authors, from different blessed minds.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to enjoy reading and to enjoy writing as well.
Truly awesome community with so much to share.
God Bless You all the way..
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Review of April's Choice  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Grace,
A very touching story with so much lessons to share. It touches the Right Parenting issues as to the little boy that needs the care of his parents because what was he doing in the late of the night, the carefree ways of young people drinking and driving as if they owned the world. SAD BUT TRUE.
VERY CONVINCING STORY WITH A SAD TWIST.
Fiction or non..fiction all the same you are a very good story teller.
My suggestion is about the presentation. Possibly you can make a space in every paragraph.
Suggestion only.
I admire your talent.
Thank you for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God Bless !
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Review of Daddy's No Nanny!  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Greetings charlottetoby,
A summary of a day in a life of a parent and the wonderkid. Hahhhhaha !
You made me smile reading your work.
Very real. Yes..Parenting is not easy but the rewards are enormous.
Thank you for sharing your story.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of pity party  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings !
How sad and how horrible is the result of this party. Whew !
My suggestion....
u will concur....
Please change this to ...
you will concur
Also the presentation, possibly you make the alignment in order. Suggestion Only.
Thank you for sharing your talent through your poetry.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of FRED AND COCO  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings WhoMe,
Nice feeling reading "FRED AND COCO "....and the short explanation below the poetry
made me feel so happy for you and your family. I can feel the joy in your hearts having these pets around.
A happy read for me.
Thank you for the wonderful time.
See you again in this awesome community.
Write On, and GOD BLESS !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello moous,
We have nine cats in the house so this one made me very curious.
I admire the creativeness.
It is always fun to have pets in the house.
Possibly you can write a book out of this diary of a cat's life.
Thank you for the read.
Write On.
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Review of 15 Editing Steps  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello deborahowen,
This is educational, informative,helpful and useful.
Your loving heart shows how caring and how thoughtful person you are by sharing this to all of us in this awesome community.
May the Good Lord Bless You More and More Each Day.
WRITE ON !
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