Hi Dave! Lovely poem! I don't know much about Sonnets (I write Free Verse) but I loved how beautiful this was all put together. You used your words very well and that made it enjoyable to read :) Thank you and continue writing!
Love is hard in poetry, a lot of people when making love poems tend to make it super cliche. BUT! I loved this poem! It is original! I like how you didn't show heartbreak in this but learning from how love can make you feel even if the feeling is in the past! Loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Very nice poem :) I like how you described the pieces of you that lie in Georgia. I don't really have any critiques for your poem here, it is very beautiful and well done! Keep writing please :)
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