This poem admits true relationship of the writer. Every time when writer writes poem, a whim inside him make him feel something. He writes his experience with it. The whim move with every letter he write. The saline spell meet ground. Earth is a like a ground, the whim is like a white-cloud that cherish some spiritual presence. Where the whim touch the writer, writer writes the spelling. Soon when writer cherish with charm the whim enter his meat, he makes sentences and meanings out of it. At last what he does, makes a meaning for the writing by sub dividing the poem into stanzas.
In first stanza, he feels the existence of his soulmate a female. He experiences it as same energy, past life etc.
In second stanza, he is perplexed and says it a painful and no hope.
In third stanza, passion, romance and rhythmic desire.
In fourth stanza, circumstances , love and commodity.
In fifth stanza, he says she can survive without me even.
In sixth stanza, he asks if she had a magic. He motivates her asking if she was with any other prince, if she can attract. Could she convince him, dress up more charming.
In seventh stanza, he says he is the only person like him, no magic can adept. He is planning for future.
In eight stanza, he says she never came to him, all that was going on till now was his feeling, that he felt her waiting for him. The question is whether he will ask her all this.
I had never had a romance. This piece of song makes me to have one. Never ever before I wished to have one. Because I knew. I knew the spirits did not sleep without me. I knew the true thing is love ❤ not romance. Extra ordinary thing that happens when we break romance is a recorded tape. But breaking love ❤ is breaking everything.
Once upon a time there lived a King named Lear. His ear was dead out of fear. What happened was the queen who loved the King took deaths call avoided the Kings dead ear. Queen in one hand was unwell. In the other hand King Lear was unwell with this dead ear. Both were in pain.
Since both were totally in pain , the door was wide open.
It was me who broke the sin forged chain said queen. She was a maiden like Jesus mother. Truly when Christ died, and all raised.
Reading this poem I did not feel that glad. Because the fear of dying exist in all of us. We fight each other. But flying is a unavoidable thing to us. Mango tastes sweet and sore. Jack and Jill played twice. All this is agreeing for our health. Smooth sound is dreadful. Syllables rise from the spell of words. This words make sentences. Sentences make meaning. Meaning makes language. Language makes life. Life gives health.
This is a wonderful song. Mainly I liked. I liked this so much , I feel as if this song is made for me. I can music it to deep understanding. I have understood it to the fullest. The counterpart who wrote this poem, is Keaton Foster. The divine bliss is shower. So much care is given to the reader .
He says , he is seeing everything that I am not. He is saying that I am in the place where I am, He is some where away. I agree with both this.
The poet says, he has no fear, he loves light so much , darkness is sadness to him. He says that I am too much fearful.
The story is very long to read and understand. I cannot make out the difficult spellings. The conversation is clear. The part of the story which said the analyzing the aliens is not separate. Throughout the story the analyzing is there. The inverted commas are given.
Extra thing I want to point out is, there is no fear among the speakers. They talk simple language. There are many people in the scene. No separate hero is visible.
The author does not want to act. Vixens , predators are very crucial parts of the story. The whole lot of people are speaking. May be when somebody talks , the alien moves , the movement is noted.
I felt , In olden days large reptiles were endangered species. This has to be saved. For his purpose, a whole lot of people are kept to note down the movement of this Predator.
Dance me to the end of love
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When you spy on your man...
Actually the story is very nicely told. There is no spelling mistake. There is no grammar mistake. The sentences are short and understanding. The whole story is subdivided into correct paragraphs. Every situation that takes place is beautifully described.
Its a small story, any person can read soon. The story is even better to be read in leisure time. The story depicts the couple who are meant for each other.
First half of the story says how the writer felt about her better half. How she liked to keep themselves. The inner urge for remembering it. Even a wrong attempt of her better half with another woman did not annoy her. She liked to skip that part of the story. She wanted the story to remain as she wished. So readers like it in that way. The readers find her heart in between somewhere. The readers including me may become a fan of the author as she is very much motivating the path of every one.
No turning in the story is seen. Even without any turning the story ends like this:-
We are meant to be together, forever.
Dance me to the end of love.
I liked this story very much. Short sentences are easy to understand. Well structure paragraphs. Inverted quote for talks is nice. Understandable language. 738 words is perfect. Story convinces the innocence of writer. Grandmothers telegraming getting signature of writer. Lunch loving 😍 writer. With privilage of staying there. Death of swamigi. Belief. That was what was required. Very touching story.
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