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Review by Pascale
Rated: E | (4.5)
That is such a great poem and quite inspirational too. I love the way you tone changes from negative to postive and how it reminds the viewer to look with in themselves. (That's how I interpreted it.) It may be short but the fact that it is so simple makes it so interesting and at the same time thought provoking. Definitely one of my favourites of the week!
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Review by Pascale
Rated: E | (4.0)
That is a really beautiful peom and I'm sure your wife must love it. I love your line "Then you are my pastel painted girl." It's so unique from the usual cliches used. As for your thrid stanza: it simply took my breath away. I hope you continue writing like this because it's beautifully unique.
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Review of Forget Me Not  
Review by Pascale
Rated: E | (4.5)
That is an incredibly powerful poem. I'm going through a hard time spiritually and this almost reduced me to tears. That is beautiful.
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Review of Sleeping Angel  
Review by Pascale
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow this really is amazing I loved it! So beautifully written and so powerful. It's the sort of thing I would love my boyfriend to write about about me. Your descriptions are stunning and even though it's short it gives a powerful impact that pretty much left me breathless. Keep it up.
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Review by Pascale
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Personally I struggled with this because as you said it is a different style. But your writing is really beautiful and quite powerful. It's also deeply spiritual and even if I struggled with it I would love to see it developed further. I'm keen to find out more about this "child" and the "escape." it awaits. You're brave to try such a different style and I hope you continue!
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Review of Spring Cleaning  
Review by Pascale
Rated: E | (2.5)
I really enjoyed this because the set out is so different. I haven't read something like this in a while. I really belive this has a lot of potential and look forward to reading how you take it further. I also like the way you involve the reader by pulling them into the story. It's something I could see myself getting lost in. Keep going!
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