This is a walk in the park type of poem. Very easy and yet touches the heart. How many a times we are like old jacob or like the woman. Thanks for sharing this. It;s short but meaningful.
You gave it the huge gulp! Great work. A refreshing style and good choice of words. The power of the word tsunami was unleashed in the mouth of pitiful creatures who lie waiting to be wiped off the face of the earth. Speak it softly as it would devour your wholeness.Thanks for sharing!!
Thanks Tricia for sharing. This is good help. Very simple and basic. I have been thinking of writing a book but still dont where to start. You gave me a good starting point. I hope you can read some of my articles too and tell me what you think of it. Thanks again!
Gripping story. The way you play with words gave the paragraph a deeper emotional connection. You carried me straight into the fog, giving me the chill with the same confusion as the persona in the story. Very well written and in good taste. It is in this deep rolling truth that we find reality a much more palatable taste that that of a tragedy with no sense and meaning. Thanks for sharing.
Nice touch on the food. It is really our preferences that make us who we are. Our choices that makes our life what is it. The spice of life lies in the taste buds of the beholder. I like the last part where the morsel we digest is the life we are to live, convinced that it is our character made up of what we take in.
The topic is catchy. Good point of view though a bit lacking some power. The opening question is very provoking though i am expecting more on the next stanzas. Hope you can more ingredient. YOU already had it coming. Add more supporting facts of life and some drama. It could be more painful or more exciting. You already had it coming. Good Luck.
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