Hey!!I am still new to this site.An amateur when it comes to writing but I could just find a few grammatical errors in this write up..Like "fighting for someone who is busy fighting for someone else" would sound better.Also "when you love and when someone loves you" seems better..Many more like this!
Just my opinion!Thanks!
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