I love the details in this piece! I love the part where you say, what's the point? I love the crisp fallen leaves and the tall corn rows. I wasn't expecting anything bad to happen at all. I definitely wasn't expecting the dog to die. Thank you for writing this. This was great!
I like this story a lot. You should add more! I'd love to read what you come up with. Tip: Make a paragraph whenever the time, place, topic, or person changes. For example; whenever someone speaks, start a new paragraph. Or at least have a paragraph break.
I love this story! This story should be turned into a book if you want to do that. This makes me want to know more. Please continue with this story. The mom warns her daughter and the dad encourages her. That sounds a lot like the difference between a mom and a dad.
This is a great story! I love that you chose to write a story from a t-rex's point of view. I like the line, "After all, they knew I like them to be my food someday but not today." Please write more from a dinosaur's point of view. Different dinosaurs, like triceratops or brontosaurus
This is a great poem! Is this about somebody falling in love with you or you falling in love with them? Why is your heart unbeating? Are you dead? I love the line, "A spirit at twilight" I also love the line, "Tethered by a bond both ethereal and taut."
This is a really good story. Why is love magic illegal? I mean, I can understand why it might be illegal, but I'd like to know why you wrote it like that.
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