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Review of Can't Cry  
Review by Pen In Hand
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a marvelous poem. Unfortunately, few people will understand it. Because most can't imagine the reality of stolen tears.

Personally, and this is only my opinion I don't think the title is quite right it just doesn't seem to fit the tone. Worst yet is that I have no recommendation either.

I do think that your word selection is good and you have portrayed the emotion and imagery just right. The rhyme seems just a little off but, I like the rhythm and perhaps it doesn't need to rhyme.

This I'm sure was painful and I appreciate you sharing.
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Review of Alone  
Review by Pen In Hand
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sarah Rae

This says or rather it implies a lot.
Nearly impossible to explain how so few words could tell such a story. Actually quite a few stories could fit into this.

Nice rhythm, good emotions and nice visualization.

Thanks for sharing this
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Review of Zealots  
Review by Pen In Hand
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this
You seem to have covered all the bases in your description of different types of Zealots.

My favorite line:
Passion for their cause replaces reason in the minds
of zealots, who seek to force all others to think, to live as they do…even if it kills them.

I had a little problem with the rhythm in a few places
it's a matter of leaving out unnecessary words. But, this is a matter of my opinion.

Thanks for writing this.
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