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Review of Genesis  
Review by N.A
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
(Forgive me if this review isn't very helpful.) An intriguing take on the biblical story. I quite likes the AABB rhyme scheme and your vocabulary was brilliant in keeping the rhyming smooth, and carrying the story seamlessly. My favorite line was the last "She ate them out of house and home." A comical line that I didn't expect, but did not ruin the poem in any way. It actually made it better in my opinion. My conclusion... I loved it!
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