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Review by romance_junkie
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the fact that you went with a mirrored acrostic. I thought your imagery was really dark (in a good way), especially the last stanza. You succeeding in making me not only believe but feel your pain.

My only criticism, and it is a minor one, is that I think you do not need the commas bracketing 'hauntingly' in the first stanza.
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Review of First Kiss  
Review by romance_junkie
Rated: E | (5.0)
I laughed the whole time I read your poem, and it made my think of my first kiss, which was just as awkward. Thank you for bringing back a slice of my childhood, and for the vivid pictures your words painted.
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