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Review of My dying love  
Review by uniquio
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like this. It may be slightly higher than 3.5 in my mind, without being 4.0

Its short length is long enough to tell a very short story in this type of wam-bam quick piece, such length being a key ingredient itself in this piece. It could explain why this happened, but it doesn't really need to, and would lose that quickness appeal doing so. I like the story.

Take one of the m's out of feminism as you have it, and change wonder to wander.
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