Different, scary, weird and very, very good. I could NOT stop reading. I want more. Write more about this. This was nice: Everything is written. We are the ones that erase it sometimes. Wow
The occult and the dark are my very favorites and with this story, The Offering, I felt taken and dragged to those crossroads and sucked into the night. The characters were strong and mysterious and the ending, superb! I will follow your stories. Each one is a delight! Excellent work! PD
I think that this has been the best story I've ever read so far. The way the gypsy woman talks, acts, says things... you must listen to things around you, right? So captivating. I really enjoyed this story. I was sad in the end but it was so poetical, so touching. Fine piece of work, no doubt. PD
That was really very good. I was pleasantly surprised with the ending. You are good. I'll read more. Write more. I liked the way you write about Brazilian things in your stories and the supernatural variations. I read the Red Door but must go back to it, again. I'll keep track of your writing. Great job.
PD
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