There are times in life we stand on the edge of our emotions and wish to jump. We should accept the help from outstretched hands of the people who care about us. This poem speaks of a being forlorn yet there are those who are willing to help. Grab on and don't let go until you feel safe enough to write some more. Good luck.
This was full of great information for the new person starting out in the website. I was taking notes throughout the read so I would suggest anyone getting ready to read have pen in hand. (Like any of us don't already!) I now have some starting points which is usually all the new writer needs.
A brave poem about a terrifying experience. The use of colors is fabulous and indicates the extreme changes the individual must endure in short periods of time. The poem may be a bit confusing for someone who has not experienced this type of abuse. But it is very powerful and I hope the person is fictional or has found safety.
A wonderful poem with a great story. It was enjoyable to read aloud and listen to the words flowing together and rhyming. The imagery was good with a touch of mystery. It did seem very structured and it was written along the lines of same type poetry of by W. H. Auden. I would have liked to seen where this poet would have gone without the rhyming.
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