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Review of Not so Sweet  
Review by musique
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello marcusl.

To tell you honestly, I didn't like the story. Instead, I loved it! You did an excellent job in writing this piece.
The story very much supported the title, and before I read it I was asking myself what could be in this piece of work.

What caught my attention was the finale of the story which is the last line: "Trying may not always be sweet, but at least, it's not as bitter as regretting."

It is very inspirational and overwhelming!

VERY GREAT! write on!
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