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for entry "Chapter 1: Old Dogs" 
Review by Alucard
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good. It is obvious that you have an understanding of physics and the motion of bodies in space. What I really like is that you do not get bogged down by all the scientific reasonings for what happens. You use one or two paragraphs to explain things. This also shows your attention to detail. You also do not use the same words over and over. Very well written.
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Review of Spider-Man Quiz  
Review by Alucard
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Its not too hard but for those who do not know about Spiderman may miss a few. The hardest is the symbiote one. You could have put one in about Kraven the Hunter or the Black Cat. Overall it was enjoyable and a fun time killer.
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Review of Rain  
Review by Alucard
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very dark and brooding. Yet it is very well written. I like your contrast between the kids playing and the man sitting on the side of the road. Also, I like how the location does not matter. Yes we know what they look like and what their jobs are to have an idea where they live, but ultimately location is not part of the story. Well done.
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for entry "Prologue" 
Review by Alucard
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Very well written. There were a few misspellings here and there but they did not detract from the total story. This story is very unique and original. I hope the story takes place on multiple worlds. When it comes to describing the worlds, if you can describe the worlds and the people the story will grow and gain a life of its own.
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