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Review by Sherry S
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Joey,

Another perfect story, I can't believe how well some of the folks here on this site write, it is amazing. This is one of the best short stories I have read. I liked how you grab the reader's interest from the start, the dialogue was perfect it was as if I was riding in the car with Jack and Michelle. I was worried about them for a while you built the suspense about Dennis very well. But the ending was completely unexpected. I have no doubt this will win the contest you have entered it in. it is a great story.
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