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Review of Drowning  
Review by megalomania
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great story....well detailed and descriptive.....I felt like I went under the water too and was fighting w ith Kyndra to stay alive..... thats exactly what you want, to take the reader with you and feel exactly what your feeling.
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Review by megalomania
Rated: E | (3.0)
There is a story about a man who was paralyzed for 38 years. He waited by a pool in hopes he might find his way in once the angel touched the water. When a man named Jesus saw him, "He knew he had been sick". He asked him if he wanted to be made well.

You have a unique advantage because you know what it is like to suffer and therefore have learned to appreciate things more. You have been through what others are going through now and need to hear from you. Adversity can often times be our greatest teacher and most cherished foe.

God know your situation and wants you to totally rely on him in everything. He loves you and wants to take your pain away. That story is in John 5

Great poem......I could feel your pain........and i know what its like........God bless
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