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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Regina Felicis
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Whoaaa. I'm impressed! I wasn't really sure what to expect--I was torn between the whole thing being a huge joke and there really being something amiss. Creepy as the dickens, particularly the last bit. "If you tell, you'll go to Hell"--nice touch. Well done!
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Review of The Ice Lake  
Review by Regina Felicis
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, this was really awesome! You had a great theme going: that of not holding on desperately to the past, of living on and embracing the future. I liked your metaphors: the lake of ice was a good one to symbolize being shut away from the world. The only thing I can critique is, for me, a personal thing; somehow, I found the sentence "A wave of bitter sadness washes over my battered soul" to be a bit jarring. Other than that, nice work!
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