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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Is it true you sense the sorrow of life in my blood.

Shouldn't there be a question mark at the end of the sentence? And another grammatical problem I have...

You, that are my only comfort, so near

I think there should be some type of punctuation at the end of the line as well. Other than that, it's an excellent poem! I love the lines:

You, that have this sense that no man can.
Is that the reason your profound eyes glare at me?

Good job!
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