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Review of Imagine  
Review by Alfonso
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem! The rhyme and meter are excellent. Thanks for sharing.

BTW
The only thing I would change if it were mine would be using "upon a star" instead of "on a star". The word "upon" seems to make it flow a tad better.
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