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Rated: E | (1.0)
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I would like to make an apology for my earlier review. Hopefully, I will be able to finish this one before it sends off! *Shock*

I believe your piece will improve significantly with some basic formatting.

{size:4}{center}Try this formatting for your title!{/size}{/center} will turn out as:

Try this formatting for your title!


Here is an edited paragraph that will tell you how to use bold and popnotes!:

"What is a {b}fairy?{/b} Author J.M. Barrie wrote in Peter Pan that “when the first baby laughed for the first time, its laugh broke into a thousand pieces, and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies.” . What do you think? Could you tell the difference between a fairy and an elf? A brownie and a pixie? No? Well, I’ll tell you how.

I suggest you use "Double Space Paragraphs". Edit your static item and scroll down to "Section Five". Simply check the box and see how much neater your work looks. Check out WritingML Help for more on bold and sizeand popnotes too! An alternative to popnotes you could use is footnotes: WritingML Help for footnote. You should be able to find a way to use footnotes at school or home when printing , but on WDC popnotes can be much more convenient!

Try injecting occasional humour into your essay. (It could be a great way to use those popnotes!)

Give each creature a few paragraphs. A great format could be:

Paragraph One: History and Appearance in Literature

Paragraph Two: General Information

Paragraph Three: Interesting Facts

I hope you enjoyed my review, and will take action upon my suggestions. If you do, I will not mind returning to the piece and re-rating. I'd also like to tell you 1 *Star* means one cheer! Hip hip hooray! *Smile*

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The format of this piece is the first thing you can change. *Wink*

Using Size 4 and center for your title could help it stand out more.

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